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Chapter 2 The Price of a Promise

"No matter what happens, we will find our way back to each other." Naomi looked into his eyes She smiled. "And I will never stop believing in you, Damian Blackwell." They joined hands beneath the old tree. Neither of them noticed the elderly woman standing on the other side of the fence, watching them with a strange expression. Madam Evelyn had lived in the neighborhood for long. People often gossiped fhat she knew the histories of some families, the secrets of ancestors, and the meaning of promises made beneath certain trees. Her eyes rested on the couple's joined hands. Then she looked away. "Promises,"she whispered to herself, are easy to make when the future is till kind. Three days before Naomi's departure, Damian received another rejection.This time, it was from a company he had dreamed of working for since graduation. He sat alone in his room, staring at the email on his phone. The little money he had saved was nearly finished. And soon, Naomi would leave. He felt as if life were taking everything from him at once. A knock sounded at the door. He opened it and found Naomi standing there with a small envelope. "What is that?" he asked. "Something for you." He opened it. Inside was money. Far more money than he had ever expected her to give him. His expression changed immediately. "Where did you get this?" "I saved it." "For what?" Naomi hesitated."For my departure expenses." Damian stared at her in disbelief. "No." "Damian-" "I won't take your school money." "You need it more than I do. "Absolutely not please I can't take your departure money. She pushed the envelope toward him. "Listen to me. This isn't charity. I'm investing in the man I believe you will become." His jaw tightened. "And what if I never become that man?" Naomi's expression softened. "Then at least you'll know that someone believed you could." He looked at the money. His pride told him to refuse it. His circumstances told him he had no choice. Finally, he accepted the envelope with trembling fingers. "I will never forget this," he whispered. Naomi reached up and touched his cheek. "Then remember me when the whole world knows your name." He pulled her into his arms. "I'll remember you when I have nothing. I'll remember you when I have everything." She closed her eyes, holding him as though she could somehow preserve that moment forever. Neither of them knew that, in a few years, Damian would stand in a mansion filled with expensive furniture, surrounded by people who praised him, and struggle to remember the exact sound of her laughter. That night, Naomi went to Madam Evelyn's house. She had heard the old woman speak of a traditional rite that could protect a loved one's journey through hardship. Naomi did not fully understand it, but desperation had made her willing to listen. "Are you certain this is what you want?" Madam Evelyn asked. Naomi sat across from her, her hands clasped tightly in her lap. "I want Damian to succeed." "That is not what I asked." Naomi swallowed. "I want him to have a future. I want him to escape poverty. I want him to become the man he dreams of becoming." "And what are you willing to give?" "Whatever I must." Madam Evelyn's face darkened. "Be careful, child. Love is not a market where you can exchange your happiness for another person's success." "I am not asking for his love in return." "Then why are you here?" Naomi lowered her head. "Because I'm afraid that if I leave him behind, life will destroy him before he gets his chance." The old woman studied her for a long moment. Finally, she stood. "There is a ceremony you may perform. But understand this: no ritual can make another human being faithful. No sacrifice can remove his freedom to choose. What you offer may bind your own life to the consequences of a promise, but it cannot force his heart to remain yours." Naomi's fingers trembled. "Will it help him?" "It may open a door. What he does after that will be his responsibility." Naomi thought of Damian's rejected applications, his empty room, and the way his face had fallen when she told him she was leaving. She thought of the promise beneath the mango tree. "I want to do it." Madam Evelyn sighed. "Then you must understand that some doors are easier to open than to close." Outside, the wind rustled through the trees. And beneath the old mango tree, a single green leaf fell to the ground. Naomi had made her choice. She believed she was giving Damian a chance at a better life. The candle went out at exactly midnight. Naomi Williams stared at the thin trail of smoke rising from its wick, her heart beating so loudly that she could barely hear the wind outside Madam Evelyn's house. The room smelled of dried herbs and burning wood. Shadows danced across the walls, stretching and shrinking whenever the flames of the remaining candles flickered. Madam Evelyn stood before an old wooden table, her expression unreadable. "It's finished," the elderly woman said. Naomi swallowed. "Does that mean Damian will succeed?" Madam Evelyn turned toward her. "Child, you have asked that question three times tonight." "Because I need to know." "And I have answered you three times. The path before him may become clearer, but the steps he takes will still be his own."

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Chapter list

11 chapters total

  1. Chapter 1Chapter 1 The Woman Who Gave Him Everything
  2. Chapter 2Chapter 2 The Price of a Promise
  3. Chapter 3Chapter 3 The Number Five Years

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